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Reborn of the black ashes,
A voice sings in the dark:
Come hither.
Sweet is the voice,
And great are its promises.
But within it truly is darkness.
Under the lie
Lies the truth.
It wants to give nothing,
Yet take all.
I wrote this.
But don't remember doing so.
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gatogirl12345 Featured By Owner Aug 10, 2007
Definitely how evil acts.
TheeLit Featured By Owner Jul 15, 2006  Professional Photographer
very moving and very poignant. I like how u said all u needed to say while still keeping it short enough to allow the reader to interpret what they will from it... great job, this is what reading poetry is supposed to be like :clap:
Testralli Featured By Owner Jul 13, 2006
Beautiful :heart:
Blank-Page-Emperor Featured By Owner Jun 27, 2006
Nice, sorry I was slow to comment.

There's really not much to say about it, 'cept it's good.

flynfreako Featured By Owner Jun 27, 2006
oooo i usually don't really like poetry, but i think this is really good! :D
DownerKid Featured By Owner Jun 23, 2006
Holy shit, this reminds me of this manga that I've been reading, called 'Diabolo.' It's only three volumes long but AGH I'M OBSESSED. And this sounds so much like it, it just. Makes my happiness level rise. 8D
Kakiharasan Featured By Owner Jun 22, 2006
awesome to see a new deviation ;P

Alot can be said in so few lines.

It makes me want to draw stuff..
LadyShadowblade Featured By Owner Jun 21, 2006
Short, sweet and to the point. Definitive ring of truth to it.
IndigoLillies Featured By Owner Jun 21, 2006
A new deviation! Gasp! And....further gasp, because while reading this, I felt this personal impact -which is between separate parties and not due for present discussion- especially with the "It wants to give nothing, yet take all" bit. ...Am quite done now. I hope you remember about more poems you forgot about so you can satiate your addicts.
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